utorok, 1. novembra 2011

TUESDAY EVENING




...............Tuesday Evening.........

the sun is touching gold on the horizon,
a sort of pinkish haze is in my room.
 another Tuesday evening running lonely ...
another Wednesday morning hiding there ...
people walk and chat outside my window,
all i see is pink sunshine and glare .
radio as loud as it can go...
stars come out and fill the sky with magic,
suddenly the wind begins to blow.
curtains rustle in the cool of lonely ...
wind from Tuesday evening scents my heart .
radio is playing orange music ,
Wednesday comes
as Tuesday night departs...

18 komentárov:

  1. I am beginning to love your poems my friend :))

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  2. Thank you a lot...I'm glad to welcome you on my page...

    Have a great Tuesday evening...

    Hugs

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  3. very pretty Autumn ...words thanks ..Viera xo

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  4. Is it yours? When I was reading it I was imagining about the scene, and is good, because touched
    me, when a poem make us to feel part of it, is good !
    Thanks my dear.
    hugsssss.ivonne

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  5. Very imaginative words... can even hear the loudness of the radio!

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  6. I like the picture you paint with your words. And I love that Moody Blues song! *smile*

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  7. I'm glad Ivonne that you like my composition...
    and thank you for your lovely comment...

    Hugs...

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  8. Welcome back dear Belita...
    I'm looking forward to your news.

    Oh yes, I like a loud music...
    mainly by driving a car...:-)
    Hugs

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  9. Thank you for your visit Terry

    Glad you like it...

    Hugs

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  10. Welcome on my page Sam...

    I'm glad you like it...
    Hugs

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  11. Thank you Caroline...

    your visit makes me happy...

    Hugs

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  12. Beautiful, and very sad and lonely.
    Thanks, Viera. :-)

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  13. Very touching Viera

    Great words

    Have a nice Wednesday evening

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  14. Thank you very much Graham...

    Have a nice evening
    Hugs

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  15. Thank you dear Regina ...
    a big hug

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  16. Lovely poem Viera you are talented

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